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 # Rinna's Games
 
 # Rinna's Games
 

+## Stowaway
+
+My last game for at least a month! I did the Ludum Dare Jam the weekend
+ending September/starting October 2023.
+[Stowaway][Stowaway] is a stealth game about a raccoon stowing away on
+a package delivery truck.
+I ended up quite happy with it, even with only 3 days to work on it.
+[][@:Rinna]{.sig}
+
+[Stowaway]:
+  https://srncq.itch.io/stowaway
+

 ## Kill Rock 'n' Roll
 
 For the Summer 2023 edition of the 2-week-long [My First Game Jam][My
 ## Kill Rock 'n' Roll
 
 For the Summer 2023 edition of the 2-week-long [My First Game Jam][My

-First Game Jam]{title="My First Game Jam Summer 2023"}, I'm making a
+First Game Jam]{title="My First Game Jam Summer 2023"}, I made a

 game about an electronic musician using their synthesized music to
 kill rock & roll.
 It's kind of a platformer where you try to get past rock-music themed
 enemies (power chords, eletric basslines, guitar solos, etc.) by moving
 along and shifting between various wave-forms.
 game about an electronic musician using their synthesized music to
 kill rock & roll.
 It's kind of a platformer where you try to get past rock-music themed
 enemies (power chords, eletric basslines, guitar solos, etc.) by moving
 along and shifting between various wave-forms.

-You can playtest the [current build][krnr]{title="Kill Rock 'n' Roll"}
+You can play [Kill Rock 'n' Roll][krnr]{title="Kill Rock 'n' Roll"}

 on itch. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 
 Was the inversion of _No Straight Roads_{as="cite"} deliberate?
 on itch. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 
 Was the inversion of _No Straight Roads_{as="cite"} deliberate?


@@ -18,7 +30,41 @@ Was the inversion of _No Straight Roads_{as="cite"} deliberate?
 no i don't play video games (lie; but i had not heard of that game
 before). [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 
 no i don't play video games (lie; but i had not heard of that game
 before). [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 

+it is LITERALLY your premise backwards
+[][@:Aescling]{.sig}
+
+booooorrrrriiiiiinnnnggg (jk).
+i hope they have better music than me and got people to play actual
+guitars for the rock music instead of using random built-in presets in
+LMMS.
+btw the current build has a tutorial level with actual instructions.
+you should totally give it a try :3c
+it works in browser even. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
+
+Update (2023 august 5): now it has background music and the rock music
+enemies are recordings of people playing actual guitars and basses
+(thanks to [][Freesound]{title="Freesound"}).
+Also I've released version 1.0 and it's somewhat prettier.
+[][@:Rinna]{.sig}
+
+i managed to crash the game by dying.
+i find it rather unnerving to keep with with the mechanics (this is
+  not a complaint)
+[][@:Aescling]{.sig}
+
+[Freesound]:
+  https://freesound.org

 [My First Game Jam]:
   https://itch.io/jam/my-first-game-jam-summer-2023
 [krnr]:
   https://srncq.itch.io/kill-rock-and-roll
 [My First Game Jam]:
   https://itch.io/jam/my-first-game-jam-summer-2023
 [krnr]:
   https://srncq.itch.io/kill-rock-and-roll

+
+## Poltergeist
+
+[Poltergeist][Poltergeist] is a chill Breakout variant where you can go
+into ghost mode to pass through bricks to get to a better position.
+It also lets you make your own levels if you want.
+
+
+[Poltergeist]:
+  https://srncq.itch.io/poltergeist