Respond to rinna's comment

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 ## Kill Rock 'n' Roll
 
-For the Summer 2023 edition of the 2-week-long [My First Game Jam][My First Game Jam]{title="My First Game Jam Summer 2023"}, I'm making a game about an electronic musician using their synthesized music to kill rock & roll. It's kind of a platformer where you try to get past rock-music themed enemies (power chords, eletric basslines, guitar solos, etc.) by moving along and shifting between various wave-forms. You can playtest the [current build][Kill Rock and Roll]{title="Kill Rock 'n' Roll"} on itch. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
+For the Summer 2023 edition of the 2-week-long [My First Game Jam][My
+First Game Jam]{title="My First Game Jam Summer 2023"}, I'm making a
+game about an electronic musician using their synthesized music to
+kill rock & roll.
+It's kind of a platformer where you try to get past rock-music themed
+enemies (power chords, eletric basslines, guitar solos, etc.) by moving
+along and shifting between various wave-forms.
+You can playtest the [current build][krnr]{title="Kill Rock 'n' Roll"}
+on itch. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
+
+Was the inversion of _No Straight Roads_{as="cite"} deliberate?
+[][@:Aescling]{.sig}
+
+no i don't play video games (lie; but i had not heard of that game
+before). [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
+
+it is LITERALLY your premise backwards
+[][@:Aescling]{.sig}
 
 [My First Game Jam]:
   https://itch.io/jam/my-first-game-jam-summer-2023
-[Kill Rock and Roll]:
+[krnr]:
   https://srncq.itch.io/kill-rock-and-roll