more about Kill Rock 'n' Roll

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 ## Kill Rock 'n' Roll
 
 For the Summer 2023 edition of the 2-week-long [My First Game Jam][My
 ## Kill Rock 'n' Roll
 
 For the Summer 2023 edition of the 2-week-long [My First Game Jam][My

-First Game Jam]{title="My First Game Jam Summer 2023"}, I'm making a
+First Game Jam]{title="My First Game Jam Summer 2023"}, I made a

 game about an electronic musician using their synthesized music to
 kill rock & roll.
 It's kind of a platformer where you try to get past rock-music themed
 enemies (power chords, eletric basslines, guitar solos, etc.) by moving
 along and shifting between various wave-forms.
 game about an electronic musician using their synthesized music to
 kill rock & roll.
 It's kind of a platformer where you try to get past rock-music themed
 enemies (power chords, eletric basslines, guitar solos, etc.) by moving
 along and shifting between various wave-forms.

-You can playtest the [current build][krnr]{title="Kill Rock 'n' Roll"}
+You can play [Kill Rock 'n' Roll][krnr]{title="Kill Rock 'n' Roll"}

 on itch. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 
 Was the inversion of _No Straight Roads_{as="cite"} deliberate?
 on itch. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 
 Was the inversion of _No Straight Roads_{as="cite"} deliberate?


@@ -29,6 +29,14 @@ btw the current build has a tutorial level with actual instructions.
 you should totally give it a try :3c
 it works in browser even. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 
 you should totally give it a try :3c
 it works in browser even. [][@:Rinna]{.sig}
 

+Update (2023 august 5): now it has background music and the rock music
+enemies are recordings of people playing actual guitars and basses
+(thanks to [][Freesound]{title="Freesound"}).
+Also I've released version 1.0 and it's somewhat prettier.
+[][@:Rinna]{.sig}
+
+[Freesound]:
+  https://freesound.org

 [My First Game Jam]:
   https://itch.io/jam/my-first-game-jam-summer-2023
 [krnr]:
 [My First Game Jam]:
   https://itch.io/jam/my-first-game-jam-summer-2023
 [krnr]: