some further corrections in the documentation

[OldStandard] / oldstandard.tex

diff --git a/oldstandard.tex b/oldstandard.tex
index 8c9a983c5da7dc1f9610ee462ec1daef6f4c4a69..7ec1d60e87f75036ca1f8b6a593a013ac48a7af8 100644 (file)
--- a/oldstandard.tex
+++ b/oldstandard.tex
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ BoldItalicFeatures={RawFeature={+embolden=2}}]{OldStandard-Regular.otf}
   {\textsc{Old Standard}\\
     \Large
     A Unicode Font for Classical and Medieval Studies\\
-    \large Based on Alexey Kryukov's \emph{Old Standard}\\
+    \large Based on Alexey Kryukov's original \emph{Old Standard}\\
     \large v\pkgver -- \pkgdate}}
 
 \author{Robert Alessi \\
@@ -116,8 +116,8 @@ BoldItalicFeatures={RawFeature={+embolden=2}}]{OldStandard-Regular.otf}
 
 \begin{abstract}
   This font is just the same as Alexey Kryukov's beautiful \emph{Old
-    Standard}. In comparison to \emph{Old Standard}, it includes new
-  letters and some corrections.
+    Standard}. In comparison to the previous releases of \emph{Old
+    Standard}, it includes new letters and some corrections.
 \end{abstract}
 
 \section{License}
@@ -157,8 +157,8 @@ under the terms of the OFL license (see above,
 update dates back to Aug.\ 12, 2013. To be more precise, all of the
 five \enquote*{commits} the writer was able to see were pushed on the
 very same day. Since then, two \enquote*{pull requests} dating back to
-2017 have been remained unanswered. It is therefore to be feared that
-the project has been abandoned.  To date, this release of \emph{Old
+2017 remained unanswered. It is therefore to be feared that the
+project has been abandoned.  To date, this release of \emph{Old
   Standard} has been published by Nikola Lečić and Bob Tennent and is
 available on CTAN and {\TeX}Live with a style file.\footnote{See
   \url{https://ctan.org/pkg/oldstandard}}